Live In Your Hour Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Live In Your Hour

Rating: 3.9


I Would Live in Your Hour As Well;
Bound by sand as it washes clean between my toes,
The waves;
move me some where up and down inside a little deeper.
Deeper held upon I stand above those sandy shores.
The sea within I think and deep, I Am I float a little closer.
Over drawn and while you watch them drift apart do we.
Water rushes in between the grass new foam has covered.
Held together, once it comes apart, against those rocks.
Salt and spray the sea again each day and night, reclaims.
Both become in some small part,
I turn each blade of grass, each grain of sand,
the wind returns as water moves my toes through sand again..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 08 November 2009

So many ways to ‘Live In Your Hour’ Aye so manyyyyyyyyyyys are still there yet, eager to read in next poem Sir. Crafting calorie+++ Ten ++. dr.sakti

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Tai Chi Italy 01 November 2009

You describe a very difficult and yet beautiful transition. You describe it with clarity and dignity. We have to do what we have to do...Love the title. Smiling at you Tai, loving the feeling of sea and soft sand between my toes.

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 November 2009

Very nice and beautiful feel is captured in your write. Lovely.

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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