Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Live Presence - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Live presence

I look back and miss you
You were really true
You reared me like real human
I felt for everybody’s pain

I could not take you along
As I was posted long back
It was duty on frontier
That was called border

You were sick for sometimes
But never complained at any time
You confided me about your last wish
Yu wanted life to be finished soon

I was afraid
That she might be laid
In my absence
I shall always miss her live presence

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  • Anita Sharma (11/18/2015 9:47:00 AM)


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    Live Presence - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

    Live presence

    I look back and miss you
    You were really true
    You reared me like real human
    I felt for everybody’s pain

    I could not take you along
    As I was posted long back
    It was duty on frontier
    That was called border, , , , , , , , , , , such excellent write.loved and liked
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/18/2015 9:27:00 AM)


    Ying Ying Thanks my dear Hasmukh Mehta your message make me cry...
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  • Shakil Ahmed (11/18/2015 4:31:00 AM)


    I shall always miss her live presence beautiful expressions, well penned, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/18/2015 3:21:00 AM)


    I was afraid
    That she might be laid
    In my absence
    I shall always miss her live presence
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 18, 2015



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