‘live Together Wtth Ache’ Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

‘live Together Wtth Ache’

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‘LIVE TOGETHER WTTH ACHE’
esspeecee // 18.03.05.

O,
Hey ache
You’re:
Colorful,
Vibrant,
Friendly
Very much indeed! [1]

Like virus
Non-living.
Enliven in
Living milieu
Of pulsating life. [2]

In various
Modalities,
Configurations,
Textures,
Tastes
You reveal. [3]

Your love,
Lingering-ness’
For livings are
Unfathomable, unstoppable. [4]

In me
You enjoy:
Your stay
Temporary
Or, permanent.
With –
Embodiment of
Ego-less- ness.
Reach us
Uncalled-for,
Unforced-for. [5]

You
Filter out
Futile, temporal
Joys and delights
Of life
And living. [6]

Blunt we’re
To understand
The very
Gamut of
The orchestration
Of your
Cosmetically colored
Pluri-potency. [7]

You enjoy
To lull
Every brighter
Merrier mementoes of
‘Goes’,
‘Goals’ of
Meaningful living. [8]

To be one
With thy
Ecstatic dance
Brew in me
Your
The unique
One and alone
Secondlessness. [9]

To me
Delight is
Dull and docile
But you’re
Hostile, crispy
Make me tipsy. [10]

Leave me not
O Dear,
Stay in my bosom
As adored
Sparkling memories of
My unblemished love
To my fiancé’s
Jilted love! [11]

I emulate, en-garland
You, with
Flowers of
Boundless patience,
Color you with
Tinseled tolerance,
Elate you with
Euphony
And sodden you with
Mellowed, somber
Savoir of
Sultry tears. [12]

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katang Chakravorty 14 October 2009

Agree with Poet Almedia Knight, ’… fresh definition of 'Ache'…’ Give ten++ with melancholic euphony. WR

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Anand Madhukar 12 October 2009

An intriguing and well expressed piece.

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Fantastic presentation of Ache. Full of grit. What I understand to Live with Ache not in Ache. With Acheful joy Ten+++ to your toiling talent

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Adeline Foster 06 October 2009

I agree, this poem sure does present a fresh definition of 'Ache'. One that at least two of my sons would agree with whole-hearted. Job well done. Adeline

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 23 September 2009

Your poem presents a fresh definition of 'Ache' and living together with it. You're colorful and vibrant-a vivid description of Ache. I rate this poem a 10.

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Seema Chowdhury 08 November 2009

very interesting poem. i liked you way of writing. thanks for sharing.

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Vanita Thakkar 05 November 2009

Humourous, sarcastic.... Poetic touch given to attitude towards the unwanted, unwelcome guest called pain.... Interesting thoughts - not so light as they appear, as they belong to the deeper dimension of humour, which remains unnoticed and / or silent. Vanita.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 November 2009

Even the pain has been given its due honor in this poem. This shows the kind heart of the poet who does not hesitate to receive the most unwelcome guest, the ache.

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Anju Addanki 02 November 2009

u have a very unique style of writing and they have deep meaning.

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Marilyn Lott 26 October 2009

Very thought provoking in your unique style of writing. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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