The air is thick with remembered pleasures.
Is alive with memory's trained sightings.
Where tho' is the lovelight we both treasured?
Hiding in unforgiveness, ...... and blighted.
We had the present as future.... Now passed
Over as unwanted gain, it painfully
Reminds the hot tears not to fall any faster.
Love only lives now down memory lane.
It's always sad when love ends, but at least there is memory lane to revert back to in fondness, 10 Lynda xx
We had the present as future.... Now passed Over as unwanted gain, it painfully it is very touching ans simple poem with very good message..it will be past tomorrow and si will be case with us too...i liked it....10 read mine yes to to innocence regained
touching poem...so fabulous in figurative language used! ! ! ! ! ! ! well done...10
A lovely poem - widows lament - I found it very touching. Kind regards Ann
Fay, 'lovelight' is beautiful a word. Also the poem is very special and remarkable... 10... Best wishes, Tsira
A very poignant piece about lost love Fay, but at least the memories of happy bygone loving days still stay alive
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very sad poem, Fay. You've certainly captured the feeling of regret. 'We had the present as future...now passed' is a great line! S :)