Loan, Groan, Moan! Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Loan, Groan, Moan!

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In pain,

Tormented within!

To faint,

Trying to paint your heart again;

Hope is the key! !

Saint of love;

Loan, groan, moan!

In pain,

Your eyes worn out with tears.

Thursday, January 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,poetry,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 23 January 2020

painful heart has no fear of loan pain! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 January 2020

Pains and Chains! ! ! Eyes warn out with tears.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 January 2020

Chains of love and life! ! ! ! Pains along the line; To be very strong! Able to overcome. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 January 2020

Pain! Trying to overcome! ! Hope is the key. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 January 2020

A portrait of one tormented from within in pain... well painted, thanks for sharing

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Kingsley Egbukole 23 January 2020

Pains of life. One has to strong to endure.

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