Alonzeyah Omangpang

Lone Ranger - Poem by Alonzeyah Omangpang

I sit in an unknown place,
Thinking it is safe.
I laugh and admire all the things you do,
Even gave myself all to you.
But the thunder startled my peaceful state
And fell into rock bottom.
I thought you were worried, but your smiling like children playing.
I am shattered and alone, like a lone ranger's soul.

Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal

Poet's Notes about The Poem

We were asked by our english teacher to make a soji poem and I was inspired by my experiences and these are one of them.

Comments about Lone Ranger by Alonzeyah Omangpang

  • (12/28/2015 9:33:00 PM)

    mahusay nakakagalak basain sige sulat pa bossing salamat (Report) Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (12/26/2015 5:12:00 PM)

    Unpardonable kind of betrayal is well depicted in the poem. Betrayal not caused by acts of omission or thoughtlessness, but one that's intensional and malicious is always difficult to overlook. A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Alonzeyah. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/16/2015 6:09:00 AM)

    I laugh and admire all the things you do,
    Even gave myself all to you. But the thunder startled. i fell into rockbottom. expressed in an imaginative way all your experiences.. like your poem. tony
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  • (12/12/2015 3:45:00 PM)

    thank you for posting your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (12/8/2015 11:15:00 AM)

    I hope you got a good grade. Thanks, Alonzeyah (Report) Reply

    Alonzeyah Omangpang (12/16/2015 6:03:00 AM)

    Thank you so much!

    Alonzeyah Omangpang (12/16/2015 5:56:00 AM)

    I hope so too, Thanks!

  • Shakil Ahmed (12/8/2015 6:28:00 AM)

    nice poem, you have portrayed your feelings very well in the poem, thanks for sharing, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 8, 2015

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