Lone Ranger Comments

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Unpardonable kind of betrayal is well depicted in the poem. Betrayal not caused by acts of omission or thoughtlessness, but one that's intensional and malicious is always difficult to overlook. A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Alonzeyah. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

I laugh and admire all the things you do, Even gave myself all to you. But the thunder startled. i fell into rockbottom. expressed in an imaginative way all your experiences.. like your poem. tony

thank you for posting your poem.

I hope you got a good grade. Thanks, Alonzeyah

nice poem, you have portrayed your feelings very well in the poem, thanks for sharing,