Loneliness Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

Loneliness

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Loneliness, may be peaceful,
But some day after,
It could be provoking,

Loneliness may be happy,
But makes you feel,
There is no relation's around you.

Loneliness may be calm,
But there is no one around you,
To share your feelings.

Loneliness makes you to,
Take your own decisions,
But no one to share,
Wheather right or wrong.

Loneliness may keep you relaxed,
But need to be ready,
To take care of health yourself.

Monday, October 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 20 October 2015

Nice poem in loneliness. One word weather to be replaced by whether. Loneliness makes you to, Take your own decisions, But no one to share, Whether right or wrong.

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Valsa George 22 April 2017

One may be happy in being alone. In fact all of us seek to have some solitary hours to feel quiet and to be left in our own world! But loneliness is different. Feeling lonely is very depressing! You seem to have got confused between 'being alone' and 'feeling lonely'! However a beautiful write!

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Kavita Singh 06 February 2017

Loneliness may be calm, But there is no one around you, To share your feelings. beautifully written sir awesome

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Sekharan Pookkat 26 May 2016

loneliness is a state of mind. A poet may feel lonely even if he is in the middle of crowd.when his conscious mind relaxes, unconscious mind alerts his eyes to see around-

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Very true, same idea, but different presentation is mine, we need to search within to assess, rather grumbling or brooding about, being left alone, good idea thanks

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Rajnish Manga 20 October 2015

Loneliness has two faces and the poem brings both these faces with different sets of values before us. One may be based on our rationale whereas the second one offers a socially relevant existence. I like it. Thanks.

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