Loneliness, may be peaceful,
But some day after,
It could be provoking,
Loneliness may be happy,
But makes you feel,
There is no relation's around you.
Loneliness may be calm,
But there is no one around you,
To share your feelings.
Loneliness makes you to,
Take your own decisions,
But no one to share,
Wheather right or wrong.
Loneliness may keep you relaxed,
But need to be ready,
To take care of health yourself.
One may be happy in being alone. In fact all of us seek to have some solitary hours to feel quiet and to be left in our own world! But loneliness is different. Feeling lonely is very depressing! You seem to have got confused between 'being alone' and 'feeling lonely'! However a beautiful write!
Loneliness may be calm, But there is no one around you, To share your feelings. beautifully written sir awesome
loneliness is a state of mind. A poet may feel lonely even if he is in the middle of crowd.when his conscious mind relaxes, unconscious mind alerts his eyes to see around-
Very true, same idea, but different presentation is mine, we need to search within to assess, rather grumbling or brooding about, being left alone, good idea thanks
Loneliness has two faces and the poem brings both these faces with different sets of values before us. One may be based on our rationale whereas the second one offers a socially relevant existence. I like it. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice poem in loneliness. One word weather to be replaced by whether. Loneliness makes you to, Take your own decisions, But no one to share, Whether right or wrong.