Long Drive Home Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

Long Drive Home

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The long drive home

Every evening i drive home
From work is only twenty kilometres
Every drive takes an hour and half
I wish i had a way of killing the minutes
The drudgery and time wasted car borne
Every working day can't get home in a hurry

The illegal transporters are on both sides
I am ensconced between life and death millimetres apart
Articulated monsters crawling in the opposite direction
belching ozone unfriendly fumes to my side
There's profanity from people who clash
helping to pass the time with some distraction

What a welcome sight reaching my gate,
though i get home quite late..
Ziggy and Flossy, my faithful Maltese poodles,
and my cat, MamboKatsi, are canoodling
wagging their tails for the purrfect home coming.
"I think to myself what a wonderful" home coming

The long drive home.
Is worth the long drive home

Monday, October 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: driving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 04 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'Traffic Traffic Traffic Jams', inspired by the poem 'Long Drive Home', by the poet Deluke Muwanigwa and dedicated to the poet Deluke Muwanigwa.

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Terry Craddock 04 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'Long Tiring Terrible City Commutes Daily Done', inspired by the poem 'Long Drive Home', by the poet Deluke Muwanigwa and dedicated to the poet Deluke Muwanigwa.

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Terry Craddock 30 October 2020

I have in the past done these tiring terrible commutes daily, once I lived on the European side of the Bosporus in Istanbul and worked on the Asian side of the city. Sometimes 2 hours or more getting home in traffic jam places, beautiful views being a transcontinental, but little time left after work. I have suffered long commutes in several jobs in different places, it becomes a grind.

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Terry Craddock 30 October 2020

To live so far from work, separated by heavy rush hour traffic, every night going home is not wise, but economics plays a part in locations, nor is it easy to move to suitable houses in suitable locations. There is a saying in Indonesia, 'a happy man lives in 5 minutes walking time from work'. It solves many problems.

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Varsha M 13 October 2020

The warmth of being back home with mambokatdi and Maltese poodle...that makes life much easier and happier forgetting all the tiring job...That is also important for a healthy life. Well presented the topic metaphorically.

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