Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Sunday, April 14, 2024

Long-Lost Cousin Comments

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On Friday last week I went
to the graveside service
of a first cousin that I hadn't seen
for seventy years.
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Kim Barney
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Glen Kappy 10 May 2024

Good closing line in this one, Kim—a bit of a surprise but totally logical. -Glen

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 April 2024

A beautiful poem that reminds us to treasure our relatives.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 April 2024

A great remembrance of a wonderful cousin. His service to his country will always be remembered. It's good you met his children and grandchildren and through them you were able to know him better.

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Belle Wassermeister 15 April 2024

It's a shame you didn't get to know this cousin better. I really like how you finished this. Superb final two lines!

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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