Look Back See Ahead Poem by Kezang Dawa

Look Back See Ahead

Rating: 3.3


Look back see ahead

I was just six when
My mom was no more;
Still can be seen my
Mother's gravestone,
A bit away from
The old home shed:
From her ashes a
Flower garden instead.
Though I can hardly remember her,
The scent in the air,
The song of birds,
Sounds of nature,
Brings her memory to bear.
I recall my mother barely at all,
As if through distant portal.
I sent my eyes through this window
Into a world I can never know.
Yet I feel her stillness near,
Her whispers I almost hear;
Don't let myself down
In loss and pain;
Knowing next life we'll meet again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rigzin Namgyal 20 May 2012

..wonderfully penned...how much you long for ur mother...thats has been beautifully put into words... ..great work..

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Sd Tiwari 12 August 2011

Nifcely writen good poem. I give full marks,

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Michelle Claus 20 May 2014

I'm sorry that you lost your mother at the tender age of 6. Your mother would have loved this poem, I'm certain of it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 May 2014

very nice.remembering your mother you have dropped a nice poem.liked it.

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Gajanan Mishra 20 May 2013

knowing next life we will meet again, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Jayne Davies 20 May 2013

Beautiful! Well done x

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Rigzin Namgyal 20 May 2012

..ur emotions wonderfully put into words...

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