Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 421,662 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Look Downward - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Look downwards

You shall never find
Land of such kind
Where all are satisfied
Without being lied

Thousands of thoughts
Are fought
Ceaselessly
And commonly

You shall never succeed
Without greed
For an object
With forceful act

It is desirable
To mix with people
And struggle
For simple goal

Try not to stop
But make efforts to reach top
The look downward
With appreciative word

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2015 9:55:00 AM)


    welcome Nikhat Bano
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/21/2015 10:57:00 PM)


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    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/21/2015 6:23:00 PM)


    Try not to stop
    But make efforts to reach top
    The look downward
    With appreciative word
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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 21, 2015



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