Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 451,638 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Look Towards Sky - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

How helplessly we look towards sky?
Cut sorry figure and feel very shy
It is not your fault still that makes you to think
Why all of sudden your boat was capsized and sunk

It happens with many of the promising boys
They have learnt it while playing with the toys
So when it becomes the reality to face
All of sudden you find your non existent and out of race

Someone may blame it entirely on fate
It might be possible too that they have acted late
Some people are very lucky to have it without any problem
It is like cake walk and readily available to them

These factors are interwoven and formed as unavoidable parts
We can’t do away with it and normally can’t depart
We got to face the rough weather and continue with it
The action and course has to be chosen what seems totally fit

Some of the results are unexpected and can be taken as such
It is within your reach and caliber to go up to it and touch
If due to some of the reasons it is not turned into reality
Then it can’t be taken as setback or lack of quality

We are victims of the circumstances
You may take sight many instances
Where people are capable but still face failure
Life as such can not be taken for sure


Comments about Look Towards Sky by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (5/2/2011 11:30:00 PM)


    Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery.
    Great stuff.
    A perfect...10
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/2/2011 10:20:00 PM)


    We are victims of the circumstances
    You may take sight many instances
    Where people are capable but still face failure
    Life as such can not be taken for sure
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 2, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 4, 2011


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