Looked For You In All The Places I Had Never Known You Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Looked For You In All The Places I Had Never Known You

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I looked for you
in all the places

I had never known
you.

Here your fingers
paused

poised

before rat-tat-tatting
the extravagantly large brass
door knocker

that held your face
smiling back at you

but curved
out of all recognition

sticking out your tongue
at you

and I too
only hours later

stood here
as unknown to you

(as you to me)

my face curved
laughing so

my hand poised
& paused so

little knowing
that my touch

would touch
your touch

separated by
the chance of coincidence


I too sticking out
my tongue at me

grinning curvedly
back at me!

Here in a coffee shop
we sat

back to
unknown
back.

I just finishing
the last dregs

(curving a finger around the edge
to lick the last of the cappuccino)

just as you begin to sip
that first cappuccino flecked sip.

Or here
in a crowded lift

I crushed at the back

as you
step gloriously in
only to step firstly out

at the fifth
as I continued on my lonely way

to the seventh and
final floor.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 27 May 2008

Ships do sometimes pass in the night..with all the polished brass reflecting our lonely faces....

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Onelia Avelar 23 May 2008

your poems, Donall are like drops of a rain of love - they soften - like the rain does with the soil. Carry on, Donall Rain :) - I bow down before this rain...rainbow

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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