Looking Back 15 Years Poem by Guido Blokland

Looking Back 15 Years

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I watched you
drift away
out of sight
as I moved off

I was not to know
as the train
gathered speed
that we'd not meet again

As I drifted off
the mist gathered further
as it had done
for some time till then

I did not see
until 't was
perhaps
too late

Five years passed
and I alighted
onto the same
station platform

You were not there
your prediction,
unheard by me,
had come true

You remain with me
though
you're part of me
always there

Wednesday, April 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 June 2019

very sad such things happen and we have NO CONTROL DO RED MY MOMS SMILES YOU MAY RECALL

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Chinedu Dike 11 April 2019

A sad story of loss told in eloquent finesse. Really an insightful retrospective piece written with clarity of thought and mind. A heartfelt rendition. Thanks for sharing, Guido. Remain enriched.

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Kim Barney 10 April 2019

Very sad but well written, Guido. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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