Looking Back (A Poet’s Poem) Poem by Sana Olivia Hernandez

Looking Back (A Poet’s Poem)

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Looking back,
I wrote a lot of poems.

Looking back,
I loved writing a lot.

Looking back,
I wanted to write again.

But looking back,
And reading my own poems….

Makes me wonder why I write at all...

-SOH

Monday, June 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: writing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My friend Daniel Brink desired me to change the last line to, How I write what is there...While my original write is a tad bit derogatory, his is a tad bit more fair. I am going to let whoever reads my poems decide if it is their cup of or not, I am simply the one who brewed it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 21 November 2015

Dear Sana With your consent, I want to change the last line from why I write at all to HOW I WRITE WHAT IS THERE. By changing the adverb from WHY to HOW you also change the attitude from judgment to observation. But (this is important) you have not changed the meaning. The number and quality of your poems haven't changed, and you are still in a state of wonder. This is a personal poem and you may not want to change it. But a poem is also, as Emily Dickinson put it, MY LETTER TO THE WORLD. Let those who read this letter decide for themselves whether or not it was worth your writing it, let the poem and the reader interact freely without the negative jusgment implicit in your WHY statement. The world of your readers may surprise you! ! Give them that chance.

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Roseann Shawiak 21 July 2015

My sentiments also! Writing prolifically and wondering why I do it. Great reflective poem, it achieved it's purpose in my mind. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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