Lost Poem by Maryam Khan

Lost

Rating: 4.0


In a terrible fog I once lost my way,
Where I had wandered I could not say,
I found a signpost just by a fence,
But I could not read it, the fog was so dense.
Slowly but surely, frightened to roam,
I climbed up the post for my nearest way home,
Striking a match I turned cold and faint,
These were the words on it, '' MIND THE WET PAINT''.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarif Ameen 02 April 2009

good work bachay but you must see the word order i feel it was not good bachay ghounchou ghounchou dont mind and keep on writing zahid bachie

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Tsira Goge 04 December 2008

Maryam, Well conceived poems, beautiful.10 - from my Tsira

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Anjali Sinha 01 December 2008

yes like Rehan I too will say intelligent rhyming

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hmmm..... intelligent rhyming

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