Lost Poem by Maryam Khan

Lost

Rating: 4.0


In a terrible fog I once lost my way,
Where I had wandered I could not say,
I found a signpost just by a fence,
But I could not read it, the fog was so dense.
Slowly but surely, frightened to roam,
I climbed up the post for my nearest way home,
Striking a match I turned cold and faint,
These were the words on it, '' MIND THE WET PAINT''.

Wednesday, November 19, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: fog
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarif Ameen 02 April 2009

good work bachay but you must see the word order i feel it was not good bachay ghounchou ghounchou dont mind and keep on writing zahid bachie

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Tsira Goge 04 December 2008

Maryam, Well conceived poems, beautiful.10 - from my Tsira

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Anjali Sinha 01 December 2008

yes like Rehan I too will say intelligent rhyming

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hmmm..... intelligent rhyming

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