Randy Hogan

Rookie - 12 Points (January 11 / pænˈ dʒ iː ə Mountain Range)

*****lost - Poem by Randy Hogan

As my dreams dance the stars silently shimmer
to the heavens I am released to the silhouette of stars
into your loving eyes I am lost in ecstasy of the night
there I surrender myself to you sweetly as a bashful child
ever so completely
for your beauty the stars could never ever compare

Comments about *****lost by Randy Hogan

  • (7/14/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    excellent expressions friend....I loved it....10 (Report) Reply

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  • (7/11/2009 1:19:00 AM)

    your lost
    but not a loser
    for in your eyes
    she sees the XTCs
    of the night
    a sensual poem dear Randy
    -10 anjali
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  • (7/8/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I am released to the silhouette of stars is oh so beautiful (sigh) ....in fact it all is.....(sighs)
    You have done it again Andy! Love it! 10 Karin Anderson
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  • (7/6/2009 5:26:00 PM)

    lost but not a looser..this is nicely done..naizz (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano (7/3/2009 6:34:00 AM)

    this is a very sweet poem, Randy..and i love it.
    Congratulations on your win in my challenge, WHO CAN I TURN TO
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 2, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 9, 2009

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