Lost Family Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Lost Family

Rating: 5.0


I lost me
Long ago
If not for
My mother
I'm fodder
Much better
Than father
Sorry
Mon pere
Ma mere
Despair
She cared
You dared
We died

Saturday, July 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dying,family life,father and son,mother and child
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 July 2018

Now I know how my poem on the poetesses poem has had an impact on your mind Yes distraught families stress child's mind but i the west all are individuals @ 18 so it's a common thing we have to a new life @ 18 begin now the way we all think That's why I composes learn the spelling of compromise okay now sy it as come promise we won't like us before nw will ever be for sake of children poet poet me does plea

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Richard Wlodarski 31 July 2018

Thank you so much for your thoughtful response.

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Rajnish Manga 30 July 2018

Conflicts in the family leave a deep impact on the mind of a child. Kerouac must have felt the tremors.

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Richard Wlodarski 30 July 2018

Rajnish, prior to Gerard's death, life was running quite smoothly for him. Afterwards, the family was torn apart. He really felt the tremors!

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Robert Murray Smith 28 July 2018

My life resonates with this write.+++10

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Richard Wlodarski 30 July 2018

I too can empathize with it, Robert. Thank you for your honesty.

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