Lost In The Maze Of My Heart Poem by Rini Shibu

Lost In The Maze Of My Heart

Rating: 5.0


The stars are twinkling in the sky
And me on earth draped in the wet sand
Moon is whispering softly
have lots of stories to share
The story of the wind which blew
to sweep and peep inside me
And lost its way in the maze of my heart
But it couldn't find the gem trapped
in the corner of my heart
The hidden place
where no one can easily reach
The treasured gem which I have
emits the sparks in me
to show you the way out, and never lets in

Thursday, November 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: treasure
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Hi Rini, I Just came for a re. There are very few poets I adore, I want to read again. You are among them. just loved reading once again.

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Thank you so much for visiting again.. Rini

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 November 2017

Lost In the maze of my heart is wonderfully penned Rini! ..The story of the wind which blew to sweep and peep inside me..excellent poetic imagination! I see here a promising poetess with exceptional creative talent. Congratulations..10

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Rini Shibu 18 November 2017

Thanks Dillip for the compliments..

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 November 2017

Hi Rini, Amazing, Wonderful poetry... A new way of expressing oneself... : : Moon is whispering softly have lots of stories to share The story of the wind which blew to sweep and peep inside me And lost its way in the maze of my heart: : : : A lovely 100++++

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Rini. 12 November 2017

Thanks for reading this poem and also for the remarks

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Roger Escorcia 10 November 2017

This is amazing, great job.

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Rini Shibu 10 November 2017

Thank Roger, for visiting this poem

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Lamar Cole 09 November 2017

This is a very beautiful and creative poem.

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Rini Shibu 10 November 2017

Thank Lam for your remarks Rini

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