Long Drive Poem by Rini Shibu

Long Drive

Rating: 5.0


Just you and me on the silent road
A long drive through the woods
An escape to taste the love
The gentle touch of the mist
Smell of wild flowers in the air
Sunlight creeping through the trees
And the favorite music been played
Pine trees, mountains and rivers on the way
Mind is so calm and relaxed
Everything so different under the sky
When my fingers entwines in yours
I feel the comfort and warmth
The depth of love and promises
I see in your eyes
Which pulls me towards you
And I want you always in my life

Saturday, August 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: experience,journey,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Messaoud Allalouche 28 August 2017

very nice and romantic poem I like very much

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Chaminda Pushpadewa 10 November 2018

dear poet this poem is great because it is explaining enthusiasm of love and relation ship with natural events thanks

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Carl Roussell 18 April 2018

A touching poem. The words you chose were soft and gentle which added to the feeling of the writing.

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Rini shibu 18 April 2018

Thanks Carl Roussel..! !

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White Tiger 06 February 2018

This is a beautiful poem Rini. Very relaxing to the mind and left to the imagination of the open road. A 10+++

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Rini Shibu 07 February 2018

Thanks Tiger for your kind wordsw!

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Hi Rini, The feeling of love expressed in this poem, quite differently, uniquely.: Just you and me on the silent road A long drive through the woods An escape to taste the love. And the creation of the conducive and apt environment to augment the mood: The gentle touch of the mist Smell of wild flowers in the air Sunlight creeping through the trees beautifully rendered. A lovely 100+++

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Thanks Unnikrishnan for your lovely comment Rini

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Wilma Purcell 02 December 2017

I love this poem. Thanks for the opportunity.

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Rini Shibu 03 December 2017

Thanks Wilma...

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