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Tuesday, May 16, 2017

Loneliness

Rating: 4.7
When you are in the midst of darkness
Where loneliness engulfs your soul
Twinges of hopelessness felt
Chirping sound of crickets heard
The only sound to break the silence
Open the window of your heart
To see the magic in your backyard
The most fascinating view on earth
Hundreds of shimmering fireflies
The glowing lights in the dark
Millions of twinkling stars in the sky
Like diamonds on black carpet
And you are the shining moon in darkness
To spread the light around.
Rini Shibu
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2021
I think I have read this wonderful poem before. Still I find it fresh...a timeless piece
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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 January 2021
Happy New Year to you, dear, all the best and great Blessings to you in 2021.
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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 January 2021
I have clicked on the FIVE Stars, and that did! Where are you now, dear Rini, we are missing YOU. Such a heart touching poem. Excellently done. Best wishes from The Netherlands, Sylvia Frances Chan.
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Dr Antony Theodore 05 November 2020
Hundreds of shimmering fireflies The glowing lights in the dark Millions of twinkling stars in the sky Like diamonds on black carpet moon in darkness. it is your call to shine....... lovely. tony
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Suresh Kumar Ek 03 September 2020
like a shining moon in the darkness, the poet spreads light
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Mahtab Bangalee 23 June 2019
The glowing lights in the dark Millions of twinkling stars in the sky Like diamonds on black carpet....// beautiful poetic expression; superb poem
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Beautiful poem it is.The real happiness lies in the loneliness.
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 June 2019
i still commented on LON LI NESS Hope you will like it RS
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 June 2019
toooooo excellent a poem from the renowned poetess its beyond my competence to comment hte moon the stars and you how in loneliness can live all of you
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Luz Hanaii 28 May 2019
" And you are the shining moon in darkness To spread the light around." This is such a beautiful thought never thought about it quite that way. It's true when we feel darkness, we have to remember we are the moon, the light.
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