Lost To Be Found Comments
Breathing in air, exhaling the fire
Fighting inside the persistent desire.
Red light merged with the light in my eyes
Everything rises and then slowly dies.
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I have lost myself more than just twice. - Excellent execution. Amazing
A very good first poem, serious, full of imagery, keeping to a strict discipline of semi-classic verse format. Very well wrtten.
Well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation written with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Natalie.
A fascinating first poem. You show promise. Welcome to Poem Hunter!
very lovely written verses here! looking forward to reading more from you
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Write comment. A wonderful start, Natalie. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks