Love Poem by gary hicinbothem

Love

Rating: 5.0


I have a scar that crossed my heart,
sometimes i wonder why,
why did my life start,
it kills me to know that we had to part,
this was reall hard,

this is another permanite scar,
i have so much pain and sorrow,
the only thing is it wont leave tomorrow,
i try to cetch up in life,
but i feels like someone stoped me,
with a knife,
i would be a lier if i said,
that i did not care,
this is what i have to share,

i do care,
i care about you,
baby girl pleas come bnack home,
noe that you abd my cuzin is gone,
im all alone,
so please come back home,
my heart is 2 differnt places

i have you in my life and i whant to do right,
but im so dam downthat i whant to fight,
if you come back,
i promise you'll never leave my sight,
i will never let anything come between us,
i know we'll have are times n well fuss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brianna Trombley 03 December 2008

I have a scar that crossed my heart, sometimes i wonder why, why did my life start, these lines are great, i know many that can relate to them, having asked the same? , although i cannot, i hope you can find consistency at some point in your life

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yes call her bq home, as she wz with u, by u always....sorry cn heal evrything, , , nullify all effects...

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*Trusting You* 26 November 2008

this is another Permanente scar, i have so much pain and sorrow, the only thing is it wont leave tomorrow, these lines are so true in my life. very good job. I love it. *Purkey Girl*

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Annie Girl 24 November 2008

excellent work this is good.....

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