Love Poem by Howard Johnson

Love

Rating: 4.2


Love is fleeing
Requires daily work to grasp its fashion
Like black and white rainbows

Impassioned rejection
Uncontrolable intimate addiction

Could saftely individualize
Walls built
Bricks of egotism
Neat impassive layered rows
Mortar made with efficent channeled efficaious pain
Impersonation of a contending composure
Courious,
Aluring Infatuation
Unoticed
Endorsing accumulative decietful foundation cracks.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R H 09 November 2006

'Impassioned rejection Uncontrolable intimate addiction' powerful words Howard - love really is an eternal enigma...Justine

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Duncan Wyllie 08 November 2006

I hope that things have improved for you since this time All the best Love duncan X

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Jolanta Gradowicz 04 November 2006

I've read many love poems, but I could find something new in your poem. It is very oryginal. Warm wishes.

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Anna Cellmer 20 October 2006

Very nice poem i like how you captured this the most beautiful topic of poetry here especially like this 'uncontrolable intimate addiction' best wishes and lot of addiction like this Anna

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Michael Gale 15 September 2006

Great poem. Gave ya a ten. The words built and fleeting are mispelled. Other than that this poem is excellent. God bless all poets-MJG.

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I'm about to run out the door, but I wanted to take the time to tell you how much I enjoyed this poem. And I'll for sure be reading more of your work. Peace, L&T

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Leah Dsouza 11 January 2008

Dear Howard, its kind of you to write of you on my poem [put a smile upon your face]. well how did you read it? this topic's not quite common! Your poem's better than mine! Beat Regards.... Leah

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Ewigi Liebe 09 January 2008

Love how its flowing the rhyms specially the end requires daily work to grasp its fashipn like black and white rainbows.

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Aurora Bell 19 December 2007

This poem has a beautiful rythm and well chosen language. A lovely poem to soak in

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Samantha lynn 01 February 2007

see now this is a great poem! i 'Really really liked this poem' It felt like the world stopped just a moment to read this poem lol. Love it Samantha Lynn

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