Love Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Love

Rating: 4.7


Love means,
God's heart beats
In a divine rhythm
On your bosom.
Where soul lingers on slowly
On a celestial meadow
Of sacred passion
With our luminous eyes
Where a zenithal moist breeze
Caresses your hair gently.
And your lips whisper softly
To sing the lullaby
of love rhythmically,
That embraces your ears
When you are in silence!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sajna Kailas 05 November 2011

nice one and capture the heart of many. how elegently you put the words.(kalakki) keep it up.God Bless You!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 04 November 2011

what a poem VIP! its well written with clear meaning.i just love poetry man.

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Mercy Vin 03 November 2011

hmm...its really gud........has lots of meanings....lvd it a looot....

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Kaia Grønnbæck 03 November 2011

Lovely use of language. Thank you for sharing!

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Ronel Mccarthy 03 November 2011

Lovely write-yes love is sacred-the highest frequency! I enjoyed reading your poem

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Swetha V 31 December 2011

a very good write. i like it

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Shahana mahazin 27 November 2011

loved it....exhausted on love....with some lines.

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Cassie Anderson 08 November 2011

I really like the beauty of this poem! ! ! Amazingly put! !

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Sonali Sings 06 November 2011

Love makes the world go...and here it has made the poem go at many new places, viz, to hear the heart beat of the Almighty, compared to a sacred passion travelling in space, then after touching lips, hair, eyes finally embraced the ears of the beloved in the form of a rhythmical lullaby which is heard only in silence. A lovely poem indeed! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 06 November 2011

Love means, God's heart beats in my poem i have stated love is also the blessing of god. best

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