Love And Memory Poem by Savita Tyagi

Savita Tyagi

Savita Tyagi

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Love And Memory

Rating: 4.5

When memory starts to fade and heart stops to ache,

One feels like a traitor in love.

But God's grace is as such,

That path of life moves against every bane.

Tuesday, September 3, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: Love,Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 September 2024

A beautiful poem that always resonates to those who have faith in God. Very inspiring and touching. Thank you for sharing, Savita. A favorite..

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Savita Tyagi 11 October 2024

Thank you so much Rose Marie. At times we go through all kinds of emotions. To be able to recognize is important to be able to deal with them. Thank you for your kind support.

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Bri Edwards 24 September 2024

BANE: 'bane /bān/ noun a cause of great distress or annoyance.' Savita, You ain't talkin' 'bout me! ! ARE you? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 24 September 2024

BUT, I suggest changing 'heart stops to ache' to 'heart stops aching' or 'heart aches less'. 4 stars **** bri : ) Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 24 September 2024

BUT....My friend Savita, you will be no 'traitor' in 'my book'. And WE are OLD enough to expect some lessening in our memories; what did I eat today? ? ? ?

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Savita Tyagi 11 October 2024

Thank you so much for all these comments.Yes that is what I tell myself that we are old enough to deal with all kinds of memories even to the point of forgetting some. Yet the varied emotions come and go, only some time we are able to catch and express them.

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Bri Edwards 24 September 2024

My friend Savita, you will be no 'traitor' in 'my book'. And WE are OLD enough to expect some lessening in our memories; what did I eat today? ? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 24 September 2024

oops! (cont.) I think Savita's husband died 'recently'.

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Bri Edwards 24 September 2024

I think Savita is speaking of a recently

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