When memory starts to fade and heart stops to ache,
One feels like a traitor in love.
But God's grace is as such,
That path of life moves against every bane.
BANE: 'bane /bān/ noun a cause of great distress or annoyance.' Savita, You ain't talkin' 'bout me! ! ARE you? ? ?
BUT, I suggest changing 'heart stops to ache' to 'heart stops aching' or 'heart aches less'. 4 stars **** bri : ) Thanks for sharing.
BUT....My friend Savita, you will be no 'traitor' in 'my book'. And WE are OLD enough to expect some lessening in our memories; what did I eat today? ? ? ?
Thank you so much for all these comments.Yes that is what I tell myself that we are old enough to deal with all kinds of memories even to the point of forgetting some. Yet the varied emotions come and go, only some time we are able to catch and express them.
My friend Savita, you will be no 'traitor' in 'my book'. And WE are OLD enough to expect some lessening in our memories; what did I eat today? ? ? ?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful poem that always resonates to those who have faith in God. Very inspiring and touching. Thank you for sharing, Savita. A favorite..
Thank you so much Rose Marie. At times we go through all kinds of emotions. To be able to recognize is important to be able to deal with them. Thank you for your kind support.