Falling Snowflakes Poem by Savita Tyagi

Falling Snowflakes

Rating: 4.8

I dream of climbing the mountains
Yet avoid the uphill battle of
Neighborhood streets!

I imagine being surrounded with icy peaks
But watch the plump, falling snow flakes
Only from my window!

With extended palms
I stand by my kitchen door
to catch ivory snowflakes!

The feel, the touch, the chill of cold
All are welcoming treats
Just for a little while!

Sometimes the bliss of dreamworld
Is far more enticing than the
Dynamic charm of phenomenal world!

Some where above the gray clouds
Where heavens lean down to kiss the snowy hills
The both worlds must be teaming up!

The big white snowflakes rush
Towards the dry brown soil.
My static eyes and wandering mind
Catch the sensation in rotating shifts!


Tuesday, January 24, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: Snow ,imagination
Sylvia Frances Chan 02 April 2023

Congratulations, dear Savita, your lovely poem so pittoresk, is today on number 63 of the Best Member Poems Top 100. Fantastic and presented in full brilliance. Once again my precious Congratulations for you and for this gorgeous poem. Top Marks.

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Savita Tyagi 20 April 2023

Thank you so much Sylvia for your lovely comment. Writing the poem I never thought it would be on the best member poem list.

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2. So picturesque, vivid and gay.

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Savita Tyagi 05 March 2023

Thank you so much Unnikrishnan. I am just so thrilled to read your comment. I didn't know about poem's status till today. I appreciate so much all the support of my fellow poets.

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Savita Tyagi 05 March 2023

Thank you so much again.

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I'm so happy that this poem ranks @#20 today

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Savita, this beautiful poem has now been placed at #18. Moving up in the ladder everyday. My close friends here, all of them have their poems in the Top 100

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Snowflakes float like feathers of love, petals of withered dreams..

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Snowflakes fall like pieces of winter skies..

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Falling snowflakes, in my heart they fall

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