Subrat Pradhan

Love Apple - Poem by Subrat Pradhan

The apple was yet to be red
Yet some tasted it
It tasted sour to some
And mixed to some
There were so many
Waiting for the apple
To be red.
When the apple turned red
Some tried it
Some joined in a hurry
Some in light some in darkness
Never the less
The apple grew bigger and bigger
And turned red and more red
Day by day
People increased in number
Eating, tasting
Coming and going
Making their own judgements
Once for all.
They kept on going down the hill
For all time to come.

Comments about Love Apple by Subrat Pradhan

  • Saurabh Saxena (7/30/2012 10:54:00 AM)

    great poem..several deep hidden u said Making their own judgements...this line holds true for this poem also...each will make his own judgement..none better than the rest! (Report)Reply

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  • Captain Cur (7/30/2012 7:35:00 AM)

    Good example of positive reenforcement using the
    deeper shade of love as an analogy of how we perceive
    and share love.

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  • (7/28/2012 12:24:00 PM)

    i must say you are really brilliant such a great analogy i am no expert but i think its really beautiful
    The apple grew bigger and bigger that is love grow bigger and bigger with each moment
    i loved it
    i really envy you sir hope to read more of you art
    thank you for sharing it,

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  • Vipins Puthooran (7/28/2012 10:11:00 AM)

    'tis a very good poem! ! ! ! well-written! ! ! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, July 27, 2012

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