(love) Canvas Poem by Bloodless Sister

(love) Canvas

Rating: 3.3


Lover, I’ve been thinking
about a new analogy
to describe us to ourselves from you to
me, and I think I’ve found us:
We, are a canvas that is
our love, and it goes on forever
and so far it is mostly blank but
I promise we will paint together our
paint is something of the gods or some
crazy world-their colors not all something earthly
another dimension or gods or aliens could have
planted them, well I don’t care how they got their
now I’ll take the brush and paint my
“I owe you everything I have”s because that’s what you gave to me
I see, how it feels but until you came
Love was just not right for me
and I did not think that I could have found a more perfect match if I looked for one
No I wouldn’t


So now we’ve started painting
It’s plain to see we’re a masterpiece in the
making, it’s plain to see that we are in love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 10 January 2009

So now we’ve started painting It’s plain to see we’re a masterpiece in the making, it’s plain to see that we are in love good lines. I will begain to paint with mine as you have done with yours in June. good job. Mrs. Cynosure

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Aijaz Asif 10 December 2008

a very beautiful write with the use of very strong use of metaphors...'Love a canvas' bravo, bravo...everyone's a painter some remain alone to paint with no colors and some get someone to spread the colors of life together and their's no brighter and beautiful color other than love...thanks for sharing 10+ and A+ rgds asif

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Kassem Oude 09 December 2008

Let take each a brush For our paint do flash Fall anew in love Together sing as doves.

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Scott Austin 09 December 2008

This is a wonderful piece of work you haev written for your heart. Thank you for sharing your warmth of love with us. May peace and joy continue to grow within your heart each and everyday. Scott

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Little Hatila ;) 07 December 2008

“I owe you everything I have”s because that’s what you gave to me I see, how it feels but until you came Love was just not right for me......................' hey that is just so great...maybe you have found the one, lucky you :) i loved it, that goes to my favorite....10 Hataw

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