Insert deep into my heart
Let the blood clot inside
This knife is meant for that
It is a gift from my sweetheart
When I was with her
She screwed me with beautiful words
Now before leaving me alone
She presented me this dingdong
I am hanging it since then
Unable to take it away, instant
The last footprints on my heart
Has left an image so dark
This blood keeps reminding me of her
Better if someone with broken heart insert
This dagger deep and deeper
So that he will be happy and I will live forever.
The pain n suffering of lost love is conveyed in beautiful poetic expression. Very well-conceived n well-crafted write.10
Unable to take it away! Love and pain. Thanks for sharing.
Amazing poem, Mohammed. None can hurt deeper than those we love. A 10+
Wowww. What an amazing depiction of love and betrayal. And the use of dagger as a symbol of pain is remarkably appropriate. Indeed, every loss and deceit hurts us like a dagger. Deserving no less than 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Superb... I am hanging it since then Unable to take it away, instant The last footprints on my heart Has left an image so dark (Report)