Love Hurts Poem by Lubinda Lubinda

Love Hurts

Rating: 4.4


Staring and gazing at her
from across the room
he hopes that she sees
what keeps his body & soul
and eventually his eyes
transfixed on her
he hopes that
shesomehow becomes aware
of his love for her

Unconsciously, with silent
gestures of friendship
she seems to entice him
with mixed signals
every time she would
look at him while playing
flirtatiously with he her hair
or that sparkle in her eyes
everytime she looks at him
with her beautiful-radiant-smile

So, he takes a few
momentary glances of her
from across the room
and with each glance
tries to convince himself
that each one was the last
but rather, finds that,
his statuesque-face
is captivated by her
picturesque beauty!

It's then that he slowly
and reluctantly manages
to break his glaze-like-face
freefrom her mystical-haze

It was in that
awkward moment
that he often
wondered and sometimes
pondered...
whether she could be
secretly as madly in love
with him, as he is with her!

So, he gathers enough
courage to asks her
out on a date
only to discover that;
SHE SEES HIM JUST AS FRIEND
AND NOTHING MORE THAN THAT!

Love Hurts
Tuesday, December 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes having a crush on someone can hurt, especially when you finally get the courage to tell the person how you feel about them and they leave you in the friend zone!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 16 December 2014

she seems to entice him with mixed signals but sees him as only a friend nice imagery but somewhat sad

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Samuel Dickerson 16 December 2014

Because of how detailed this story is played out and how abrupt the conclusion was, I felt as if this story was told by the man.

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Rose Kanana 06 September 2016

Hehehe great is the power of imagination.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2016

So, he gathers enough courage to asks her out on a date only to discover that; SHE SEES HIM JUST AS FRIEND AND NOTHING MORE THAN THAT! .. infatuation, attraction, imagination, desire. all that usually come up in a love, you have described in simple language. thank you very much dear poet for this poem. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2016

When the wrong thing is done. Thanks for sharing.

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Robby Makasa 04 October 2015

Amazing poem man...great stuff!

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Lubinda Lubinda 04 October 2015

Thanx, i really appreciate it!

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Saint Cynosure 19 December 2014

Tonight I am enjoying your words...

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