Friday, May 3, 2013

Love In The Park Comments

Rating: 4.9

The old park bench stood empty,
It's wood now old and worn,
She walked towards her favourite spot,
Her coat a shade of fawn.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

Really nice poem_ you really should consider writing a book _ your power of description is very apposite.

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Jayne Davies 02 January 2022

Thank you for your kind comment. Much appreciated.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2021

There he was, her handsome chap, This very place they met, Her heart now aching for her love, Her eyes now glazed and wet................so lovely and so sweet expression. Loved it

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Jayne Davies 04 June 2013

Thanks Valerie! So pleased you like it x

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Valerie Dohren 02 June 2013

A lo w.y poem, very sad and poignant, and beautifully written.

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Jayne Davies 09 May 2013

Thank you Jerry! Glad you like it x

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Jerry Hughes 08 May 2013

......................excellent Jayne!

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Jayne Davies 03 May 2013

Thanks to everyone for your lovely comments! They are much appreciated x

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Sesan Falade 03 May 2013

beautiful! very nice poem

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Gajanan Mishra 03 May 2013

long trip home, good write. thanks.

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eloida Capuno 03 May 2013

Was teary eyed reading this one, love found and lost. You depicted the emotions very well. Thank you for sharing.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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