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Love Is An Addiction, Time Is An Addict - Poem by lucifer very very very 1st

Time is an addict of an addiction
Time bring our addiction to our addict
Love mis-represent our addiction
Love represent the addiction in our addict

A mis-representation is a mis-representation of an addiction
The representation of time is the love of the addiction
A representation is a addict of an addiction
A representation is a love of an addiction

Time is an addiction of joy
Time bring joy to our addiction
Time bring the joy to our love as an addict
Time is a joy of love

Joy is a joyful of love
Joy is a joyful of an addiction
Time is a joy of joyfulness
Love is joyful to its addiction

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Love Is An Addiction, Time Is An Addict by lucifer very very very 1st

  • (1/9/2016 10:49:00 AM)


    I read this poem many, I believe most of the world is addicted to love, great place to be. (Report) Reply

    Lucifer Very Very Very 1st Lucifer Very Very Very 1st (1/11/2016 9:15:00 AM)

    again thank you for your time and wonderful thoughts of reviewing, howard savage! your so vein means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer

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  • (1/8/2016 10:03:00 AM)


    Love is an addiction and can be often misinterpreted, but what an addiction. (Report) Reply

    Lucifer Very Very Very 1st Lucifer Very Very Very 1st (1/11/2016 9:08:00 AM)

    thank you for the time of day for your review, howard savage. your so vein means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer

  • Chinedu Dike (9/4/2015 3:56:00 PM)


    A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A beautiful rigmarole of the relationship between time, love, and addiction. Thanks for sharing Kino. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

    Lucifer Very Very Very 1st Lucifer Very Very Very 1st (9/6/2015 2:06:00 PM)

    thank you for the time of day for your review, chinedu dike! your so vein means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    keanu kino

  • (9/1/2015 6:23:00 PM)


    After going around in the circle of time and addiction, I figured out this poem's meaning. You got quite involved in trying to explain the two, I had to read very carefully one line at a time and think about each one. Definitely made my mind think in overdrive. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Lucifer Very Very Very 1st Lucifer Very Very Very 1st (9/3/2015 11:42:00 AM)

    thank you for the time of day for your review, roseann shawiak! your so vein means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    keanu kino

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 1, 2015



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