Love Is An Addiction, Time Is An Addict Poem by lucifer very very very 1st

Love Is An Addiction, Time Is An Addict

Rating: 4.2


Time is an addict of an addiction
Time bring our addiction to our addict
Love mis-represent our addiction
Love represent the addiction in our addict

A mis-representation is a mis-representation of an addiction
The representation of time is the love of the addiction
A representation is a addict of an addiction
A representation is a love of an addiction

Time is an addiction of joy
Time bring joy to our addiction
Time bring the joy to our love as an addict
Time is a joy of love

Joy is a joyful of love
Joy is a joyful of an addiction
Time is a joy of joyfulness
Love is joyful to its addiction

Tuesday, September 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 09 January 2016

I read this poem many, I believe most of the world is addicted to love, great place to be.

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Black Lucifer 11 January 2016

again thank you for your time and wonderful thoughts of reviewing, howard savage! your so vein means mood or humor. your so vein godlucifer

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Howard Savage 08 January 2016

Love is an addiction and can be often misinterpreted, but what an addiction.

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Black Lucifer 11 January 2016

thank you for the time of day for your review, howard savage. your so vein means mood or humor. your so vein godlucifer

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Chinedu Dike 04 September 2015

A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A beautiful rigmarole of the relationship between time, love, and addiction. Thanks for sharing Kino. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Black Lucifer 06 September 2015

thank you for the time of day for your review, chinedu dike! your so vein means mood or humor. your so vein keanu kino

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Roseann Shawiak 01 September 2015

After going around in the circle of time and addiction, I figured out this poem's meaning. You got quite involved in trying to explain the two, I had to read very carefully one line at a time and think about each one. Definitely made my mind think in overdrive. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Black Lucifer 03 September 2015

thank you for the time of day for your review, roseann shawiak! your so vein means mood or humor. your so vein keanu kino

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