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Love Is An Addiction, Time Is An Addict - Poem by lucifer very very very 1st

Time is an addict of an addiction
Time bring our addiction to our addict
Love mis-represent our addiction
Love represent the addiction in our addict

A mis-representation is a mis-representation of an addiction
The representation of time is the love of the addiction
A representation is a addict of an addiction
A representation is a love of an addiction

Time is an addiction of joy
Time bring joy to our addiction
Time bring the joy to our love as an addict
Time is a joy of love

Joy is a joyful of love
Joy is a joyful of an addiction
Time is a joy of joyfulness
Love is joyful to its addiction

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Love Is An Addiction, Time Is An Addict by lucifer very very very 1st

  • (1/9/2016 10:49:00 AM)


    I read this poem many, I believe most of the world is addicted to love, great place to be. (Report) Reply

    Lucifer Very Very Very 1st (1/11/2016 9:15:00 AM)

    again thank you for your time and wonderful thoughts of reviewing, howard savage! your so vein means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer

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  • (1/8/2016 10:03:00 AM)


    Love is an addiction and can be often misinterpreted, but what an addiction. (Report) Reply

    Lucifer Very Very Very 1st (1/11/2016 9:08:00 AM)

    thank you for the time of day for your review, howard savage. your so vein means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer

  • Chinedu Dike (9/4/2015 3:56:00 PM)


    A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A beautiful rigmarole of the relationship between time, love, and addiction. Thanks for sharing Kino. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

    Lucifer Very Very Very 1st (9/6/2015 2:06:00 PM)

    thank you for the time of day for your review, chinedu dike! your so vein means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    keanu kino

  • (9/1/2015 6:23:00 PM)


    After going around in the circle of time and addiction, I figured out this poem's meaning. You got quite involved in trying to explain the two, I had to read very carefully one line at a time and think about each one. Definitely made my mind think in overdrive. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Lucifer Very Very Very 1st (9/3/2015 11:42:00 AM)

    thank you for the time of day for your review, roseann shawiak! your so vein means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    keanu kino

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 1, 2015



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