Friday, October 4, 2019

Love Is Not To Possess -I Comments

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Kept in a golden cage
In royal assemblage,
Too dearly did the king
Love his nightingale's singing,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2019

What a beautiful poem superbly penned. All the elements of a great poem are present in this marvelous write. Great rhyme, insight, wisdom and meaningful message. Yes, freedom and love are the great foundation. of life. Without them, life ceases. A very touching write. Onto my Poem List.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2019

Yes, 'freedom and love are the great foundation. of life. Without them, life ceases.' Thanks dear poet for the appreciating words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2019

I yearn for green woods, wide space, And for the blue skies whilst I race, ........If unless you set me free…./ Oh whence those joys of freedom be....touching expression with lofty theme. Sweet song can't be come out from a gloomy mind and griefful heart. Beautiful poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2019

You're right dear KM and thanks for liking it

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