Love Is Not To Possess -I Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Love Is Not To Possess -I

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Kept in a golden cage
In royal assemblage,
Too dearly did the king
Love his nightingale's singing,

And captivatingly did it sing
To him every evening,
But the song seemed far too sad,
Gloomy, poignant, to add,

And the king cried his heart out,
So well the bird sang sans doubt,
And one day he told the bird:
Enough of gloom have I heard.

As it is far too weighed down
Am I of cares of the crown,
Can't you sing me a happy song?
Song that carries joys of life along,

Well, sure if free I'm from greys,
It is my sadness that weighs,
I yearn for green woods, wide space,
And for the blue skies whilst I race,

But a dead dream ‘tis in this cage,
Happiness unfolds on happy stage,
If unless you set me free….
Oh whence those joys of freedom be.
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Narrative | 52.02.2019 |

Friday, October 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2019

What a beautiful poem superbly penned. All the elements of a great poem are present in this marvelous write. Great rhyme, insight, wisdom and meaningful message. Yes, freedom and love are the great foundation. of life. Without them, life ceases. A very touching write. Onto my Poem List.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2019

Yes, 'freedom and love are the great foundation. of life. Without them, life ceases.' Thanks dear poet for the appreciating words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2019

I yearn for green woods, wide space, And for the blue skies whilst I race, ........If unless you set me free…./ Oh whence those joys of freedom be....touching expression with lofty theme. Sweet song can't be come out from a gloomy mind and griefful heart. Beautiful poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2019

You're right dear KM and thanks for liking it

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Godhra - Gujarat
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