Love Lessons From The Moon...... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Love Lessons From The Moon......

Rating: 5.0


When the moon dances on the water's edge
My wish turns to fishes and swims
The milky white water reflects my desire
To shine like the moon in the sky

Today the moon came down in my eyes
To tell the story of reflection of light
The sun is indeed a great source
But it is up to us, what we take and store

This sun has burnt the moon at times
The patch we see is a scar on the chin
Yet it never shy away to borrow the lights
The reflection is nothing but the true love

On earth we expect a lot from our lovers
We fight for material things and body's pleasure
We are not ready to take the brunt
A slight heated moment turns out in breakups

We have many lessons to learn from the moon
The light, the reflection, the calmness and patience
It cannot come down to teach us everything
The limits it has set for the love is amazing.

Tuesday, July 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2020

Moon shines in the sky with glee of beam of tenderness. The reflection falls on water and crystal clear and white water reflects stillness in waves. Telling a new story, moon has come within your eyes. In this Earth we expect many things. Sun and moon fulfill our desires giving light of hope. With reflection of calmness, patience and love, we have to learn many things. Love amazes time to time and moon's love is special...10

2 0 Reply
Michael Jack 28 July 2020

Creativity at its best. You have nick to write some wonderful and creative poems. Thanks for sharing your poem.

1 0 Reply
Shreya Hacks 28 July 2020

Very true there are several different things to know about and learn from the moon.

1 0 Reply
Deepak S S 28 July 2020

Creative thinking. Never thought like this, you are fantastic imaginator

1 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2020

Night life! ! Darkness! ! ! ! ! With the romance of the moon; The love of nature! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success