Love Love... Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Love Love...

Rating: 5.0


When I look back at times

I find you winking at me
making something stir inside

Your lovely smiles makes
my life worthwhile

Your tender warm hugs are
soothing as my coffee mugs

When my slender body is embraced
could feel the warmth on my face

deep penetrating eyes
gives me all butterflies

When I am hurt could
see the pain in your eyes

Oh! How blessed I feel
to be loved by you. :)

July 2008.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 07 April 2010

Your poems are enjoyable only if one has passions and they flood one's heart inside. I like this one simply because of the simplicity of genuine love appeal. Really, a woman waits with this kind of eagerness. But man with their half-hearted love cannot respond, or do not at all know how to respond..Fantastic poem dear.

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Sukumar Choudhuri 15 September 2009

Touching! But Part II in caption reducing its depth. You will appreciate Deepti!

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Ted M 22 August 2009

This is much better than the Original. So Lovey Dovey. Lovely words, nice flow and great rhyme. All in all A lovely romantic dedication....10

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*Trusting You* 17 December 2008

When I am hurt could see the pain in your eyes Oh! How blessed I feel to be loved by you. :) good lines. you must have an amazing lover. this is full of love. great job. Becca

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