When I look back at times
I find you winking at me
making something stir inside
Your lovely smiles makes
my life worthwhile
Your tender warm hugs are
soothing as my coffee mugs
When my slender body is embraced
could feel the warmth on my face
deep penetrating eyes
gives me all butterflies
When I am hurt could
see the pain in your eyes
Oh! How blessed I feel
to be loved by you. :)
July 2008.
Touching! But Part II in caption reducing its depth. You will appreciate Deepti!
This is much better than the Original. So Lovey Dovey. Lovely words, nice flow and great rhyme. All in all A lovely romantic dedication....10
When I am hurt could see the pain in your eyes Oh! How blessed I feel to be loved by you. :) good lines. you must have an amazing lover. this is full of love. great job. Becca
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your poems are enjoyable only if one has passions and they flood one's heart inside. I like this one simply because of the simplicity of genuine love appeal. Really, a woman waits with this kind of eagerness. But man with their half-hearted love cannot respond, or do not at all know how to respond..Fantastic poem dear.