Tell heart never to sigh,
And eyes never to cry,
This world's world, for, it moves,
Love too moves on, no why.
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Musings | 05.10.2020 |
Topic: love, world
This world's world, for, it moves, Love too moves on, no why.......world and love both are moving. These are great for their moving. Nice muktaka. ____________________________________
Hi, dear KM, great to see your comments, I'm sorry I have been infrequent and irregular on PH, but can't help it. All the best....
Absolutely true. We should know this by heart. A clever write. Right into the point. To my Poem List.
Thanks dear poet, your valuable comments are always welcome. This type of quatrains, with a/a/b/a rhyme scheme, called muktak in Gujarati, any suggestion for its English equivalent?
A baby limerick perhaps? I dont know. Its good as is though.
Well, Limericks structure is already defined, and can't answer to this quatrain, but I'm sure your creative mind can find a suitable name.
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I have been here on earth still, dear MPYP, but off and on on PH and irregular, hope to tide over it, god willing. Hope, you're going great guns as usual.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear poet Deluke Muwanigwa, Thanks for your kind comments, but your page is not found by PH? ?