Love Moves On, No Why Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Love Moves On, No Why

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Tell heart never to sigh,
And eyes never to cry,
This world's world, for, it moves,
Love too moves on, no why.
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Musings | 05.10.2020 |
Topic: love, world

Wednesday, October 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,world
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In Gujarati this kind of quatrains has a name, muktaka; any suggestion for its English equivalent?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 25 October 2020

Dear poet Deluke Muwanigwa, Thanks for your kind comments, but your page is not found by PH? ?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2020

This world's world, for, it moves, Love too moves on, no why.......world and love both are moving. These are great for their moving. Nice muktaka. ____________________________________

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 October 2020

Hi, dear KM, great to see your comments, I'm sorry I have been infrequent and irregular on PH, but can't help it. All the best....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 October 2020

Absolutely true. We should know this by heart. A clever write. Right into the point. To my Poem List.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 October 2020

Thanks dear poet, your valuable comments are always welcome. This type of quatrains, with a/a/b/a rhyme scheme, called muktak in Gujarati, any suggestion for its English equivalent?

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 October 2020

A baby limerick perhaps? I dont know. Its good as is though.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 October 2020

Well, Limericks structure is already defined, and can't answer to this quatrain, but I'm sure your creative mind can find a suitable name.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 October 2020

yes last line is? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? AP where u've been

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 October 2020

I have been here on earth still, dear MPYP, but off and on on PH and irregular, hope to tide over it, god willing. Hope, you're going great guns as usual.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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