The gentleness of your voice
The warmth of your embrace
The comfort of your kisses
The peace exuding from your presence
Everything turned into a
mesmerizing mess
Passion's gone
It went on with the setting of the sun
What remained between us is simply an Ash...
of yesterday's Burning Love
We were burnt by the desire of our souls
We were drowned by the sweetness of our spirits
We were choked with the bluntness of our words
We were deafened by the silence of our thoughts
Our love tired our Hearts....
it poisoned our minds....
it betrayed us...
it kept us apart...
No more Joy...
Only Agony...
No more LOVE....
Only Hatred..
And the saddest part is no more 'US'
All in the past.
Only a memory of our vanished Love.
Such a nice poem, Madre. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.
Deeply poignant poem of love yet beautifully expressed.
Congratulations being chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. Most deserving
If love tired the heart, there is no more passion burning, no more fire, very sad lines but 5 Stars for this tragic poem.
Joyful beginning, sad demise of love.lovely poem.Top marks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It started with a beautiful relationship and ended so sadly. Still, very beautifully done. A superb write. Thanks for sharing.