Love Never Lasts Poem by MADRE KAKAO

Love Never Lasts

Rating: 4.9

The gentleness of your voice
The warmth of your embrace
The comfort of your kisses
The peace exuding from your presence

Everything turned into a
mesmerizing mess

Passion's gone

It went on with the setting of the sun

What remained between us is simply an Ash...
of yesterday's Burning Love

We were burnt by the desire of our souls
We were drowned by the sweetness of our spirits
We were choked with the bluntness of our words
We were deafened by the silence of our thoughts

Our love tired our Hearts....
it poisoned our minds....
it betrayed us...
it kept us apart...

No more Joy...
Only Agony...
No more LOVE....
Only Hatred..

And the saddest part is no more 'US'
All in the past.

Only a memory of our vanished Love.

Friday, February 12, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
Jesus Diaz Llorico 14 February 2021

It started with a beautiful relationship and ended so sadly. Still, very beautifully done. A superb write. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 February 2021

Such a nice poem, Madre. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 January 2022

Deeply poignant poem of love yet beautifully expressed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 January 2022

Congratulations being chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. Most deserving

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 January 2022

If love tired the heart, there is no more passion burning, no more fire, very sad lines but 5 Stars for this tragic poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 21 January 2022

Joyful beginning, sad demise of love.lovely poem.Top marks.

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Jayne Davies 21 January 2022

A well written poem! Congratulations on POD!

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