I will lov the person...
who can hear my silence more than my words
who can make me fly in d sky, like birds.
I will die for the person, who will live for me,
who wil not become my burden, but make me free...
The guy who will always turn my tears into smile,
who wil care for me, and become my life
the eyes wich always look at me,
d heart which always beat for me.
great job :) :) i like your poem :) :)
A lot of strict specifications you list out there...better invite quotations competetive! a poem very pleasing to read...dreams and visions of a young sim(ple) heart! good piece Sim...i liked...10
hmmm b'ful poem writen from the core of heart..soft poem..romantic approach..an expectation of a gal at her age..of some beloved..excellent done.. silence communicated..here again..10 again.
'who can hear my silence more than my words' ' I will die for the person, who will live for me' Simple lines, yet they possess some deep beauty. Your works do come from the heart. A very pleasing and life - filled poem. I hope you write more and get better. And I, like numerous others, hope you find your true love.
Well Sim you are for sure in the right Ball Park....Stay around and keep Writing. Kind Regards Philip
Dear SIM, May you find a person who is true and forever remains devoted to you! My best wishes are always with you! -Raj
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wishing you all the best