Love Pains Poem by Kingsley Egbukole

Love Pains

Rating: 5.0

When you answered undesirably
To my undiluted heart desires
I deliberately walked in the rain
That the waters might hide my tears
And dab my aching heart
To soothe my frayed nerves
A comfort to my hurt.

(Tuesday,17/10/2023,11.58am)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 18 October 2023

A comfort to my hurt..... perfect...thank

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2023

I put focus on line 3 and 4... appreciated the wonderful power of endurance. An excellent little poem. Top score! !

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 October 2023

Very beautiful Kingsley TFS

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Rebecca Navarre 17 October 2023

Ever so deeply heart touching! .. And very powerfully moving! .. Again Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 17 October 2023

So beautifully and deeply expressed! ..

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