When you answered undesirably
To my undiluted heart desires
I deliberately walked in the rain
That the waters might hide my tears
And dab my aching heart
To soothe my frayed nerves
A comfort to my hurt.
(Tuesday,17/10/2023,11.58am)
I put focus on line 3 and 4... appreciated the wonderful power of endurance. An excellent little poem. Top score! !
Ever so deeply heart touching! .. And very powerfully moving! .. Again Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A comfort to my hurt..... perfect...thank