Love Refuses To Take Form Poem by Terence George Craddock

Love Refuses To Take Form

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love refuses to take form
refuses to configure into appealing shapes
refuses to take composing elements

transcending shape shifting into heart yearning love

no design foundation coherent can weave
poles apart thoughts minds hearts lives into lovers
no poem pattern romantic passionate can rhyme

sing love throughout enduring time for two souls

lacking spark igniting fuels
can never flame stone hearts
cannot love burn

the moon shines
no mystery illuminous
beaming love light

dark sky a starless veil spans all horizons
broods in void abstinence trees leafless
stand in naked indifference to winter wind gusts
wind gusts stir spread desolation silences
in a landscape love discards refuses to habitat
season of love refuses to enter this loveless realm


Terence George Craddock (Afterglows Echoes Of Starlight)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Friday, September 22, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: elements,rhyme,romantic
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by the poem 'No Love Poem' by the poet Nosheen Irfan. Dedicated to the poet Nosheen Irfan. Complete version of the split images 'A Place Where Love Will Not Dwell', 'Cold Stone Hearts Cannot Love Burn', 'Moon Sentences Stone Cold Silences', 'A Landscape Love Discards' and 'Love Refuses', by the poet Terence George Craddock. Written in September 2023 on the 23.9.2023.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 23 September 2023

I am so humbled and honoured. And to be honest you have done a better job than I did. You have expanded the feeling, emotions and the mood. I love your version. Thanks for the honor!

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Terence Craddock 25 September 2023

It was my honour and privilege to share your poetic journey for a few short footprints along the way.

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Terence Craddock 25 September 2023

I saved a copy of your poem 'No Love Poem' in my files. I was intrigued by your theme, style and a few word choices, and decided to attempt a poetic journey in your footsteps, staying faithful to your form and thoughts.

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