Friday, July 18, 2014

Love's Twilight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love's Twilight
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I measure distance
Between daybreak and sunrise
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Akhtar Jawad 10 December 2014

Where this love stands At the door of morning Or at the door of evening And the light that prevails Still says something………….. A beautiful description of love that is not affected by time.............10

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Kewayne Wadley 21 November 2014

Very nice poet! Brillantlly calming

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Howard Mcdougal 16 November 2014

Fabulous writing thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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A creative and compelling composition that is wonderful.

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Chuy Amante 22 July 2014

This is amazing! You are quite the spectacular poet!

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Salini Nair 20 July 2014

I measure distance Between daybreak and sunrise Between sunset and nightfall And arrive at twilight......beautiful...

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Valsa George 19 July 2014

A poem on love which radiates a rare glow of twilight...... Beautiful !

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Captain Cur 18 July 2014

The light that prevails, magnificent ending to this lovely and thoughful poem.

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A creative and compelling composition that hungers for love's assurance. Well written my friend!

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