Love's Warning. Poem by Safiyyah Manjra
Love's Warning.
If true love could speak,
Ego won't have the ears to hear it.
For eyes bewitched by cries,
Heart tied with promises.
Failed compromises.
At the risk of a broken legacy fades.
Letting go of a tight knot.
Torn flesh with tasked trials.
Inside the ribs are broken,
The heart is harmed.
For the risk of true love to adorn.
Has been made as walking in a rose garden filled with only thorns.
For the risk of true love to adorn. Has been made as walking in a rose garden filled with only thorns.....beautiful expression about love; expressive the hidden meaning
Nice one. I think though if phrases could be shorted the reader will be haunted more...like Ego ear wont hear it......this way you achieve both dramatic effect and the ear/hear alliteration makes reader go aha..nice Good poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Thank you all for the comments. Deluke Muwanigwa I will take into consideration your advice. I hope it will improve my writing.