Love, So Strong

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My love for you
Is as strong as the railway track
Each day, holding tons of weight
Yet, unbending and unwavering
Parallel, they go
Thousands of miles away
Never crossing each other for a brawl
Unflinching, steadfast and undaunted
Forever, supporting each other
My love for you
So strong!

Tuesday, September 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 August 2020

Really a passionate bit of verse elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. A beautiful love poem from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 July 2020

LOVE there is strong for BELOVED LOVE there is so strong for GOD LOVE there is just LOVE for life...........

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 April 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Richard. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 08 September 2015

Never seen before such a dashing metaphor to reflect the role of love in the life of two dedicated lovers held akin to two parallel railway lines. Grand personification too. Thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 08 September 2015

my love for you so strong, beautiful..

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