Love Stolen... Poem by RUP POKHAREL

Love Stolen...

Rating: 4.9


Hungry was the street
Lying before me
Thirsty was the soul
Helping guiding me.

Unwired Dickensian slum
smiling nearby
On low tune satire
Whispered- ‘love kills and heals’.

My legs bewildered,
My sense unnerved,
My head stooped,
Yet, my thirsty soul guided me.

My legs had to reach me
To far woods
To kiss the grave of my other-half
And let her know-her lost son found.

Alas! I met her
With, all skeleton scattered
Grave broken and torn
And the wedding ring stolen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nithya Raghavan 24 September 2009

a beautiful personification of the hungry streets...i also liked the usage of Dickensian slum to describe stolen love.. very nice..keep writing.

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Lalitha iyer 22 September 2009

Very touching one, Really nice.

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Subbaraman N V 21 September 2009

I am of the firm opinion that Love- Divine Love can only create and never kill. Let us love all and serve all.Pl. see some of my poems on Love in the PH.

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Seema Chowdhury 21 September 2009

its a nice poem. a good way of putting your feelings in words. pl read some of my poems too and send your comments. take care

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Braja K Sarkar 21 September 2009

love kills and heals...A truth rediscoverd! A Very touching poem of love has touched me...

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Om p Nirola 29 January 2018

Beautifully expressed. Words are meaningfully scattered around the verses.

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Shiva Adhikari 29 January 2018

Wonderful Expression Matching many real life situations

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Juan Carlos Abeti 28 September 2009

very well written, a bit negative, nothing wrong wtih that, nice to read, great job

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 28 September 2009

A touching beautiful poem well penned.10.

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Supriya Prathapan 26 September 2009

Beautiful Poem. Loved It especially this line 'Unwired Dickensian slum'.10++

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