Love Within The Sparkling Snow Poem by Little Red Apple

Love Within The Sparkling Snow

Rating: 2.8


When we met at that snowy day
Within the snow rain falling from the sky
Overwhelmed us with its spark
Overwhelmed us with our feeling

We walked together under the falling snow
Holding each other's hand trying to find the warmth
To find the truth
I love you, you love me, our feeling..

Under that sparkling snow
As you said you love me
And wanted me to be your spouse
Joyful and contented I feel
Be with you for the rest of my life I only want

Our love within the sparkling snow
Will always be there in our heart
Grow stronger in every single day
We'll bring till there's no more day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brianna Trombley 17 December 2008

beautiful poem, with lovely imagery, great job

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 30 November 2008

nice descriptive poem! keep writing! let's listen to Tchaikovsky's Ballet (The Nutcracker) Waltz of the Snowflakes, when we read this cute poem!

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Fiona Davidson 30 November 2008

What a beautiful thought...to be proposed to under the falling snow...Thank you for sharing this with us...Fi

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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2008

Good love poem, LMS...lot of expectations and confidence there...good piece...10

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Very sweet i love the whole snow verses very nicely written..

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