Lovely Bees Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Lovely Bees

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Lovely bees
You are free
To visit nectar
And have honey from her

Love is to offer
And alter
The status
Of virgin

That shall be unique
Of its class but under check
Subject to intense love
With trust to believe

Life is like flower
With fragrance forever
To offer and attract
With lovely and fine act

It is delicate
With act to indicate
For new bid to revive
Love to blossom and survive

Flowers, you have inner perfume
That is with anyone seldom
You are blessed with by almighty
Love is seen and available in plenty

“Touch me not” beauty may say
Do not get moved and go away
Stick to your activity that is casual
Enjoy the company and maintain schedule

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 January 2014

great read..thank you Bam Bam Chillin8 minutes ago summary said it Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 January 2014

Lovely Jackie Utley10 minutes ago Nice images, enjoyed your language Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 January 2014

nice use of metaphors... Lekshmi Venugopal10 minutes ago .. to express a point of view.. :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 January 2014

thumbs up Crystal KitcherLess than a minute ago good wording Comment

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 January 2014

Lovely bees You are free

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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