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Lovely Pre-Destination It Is!

Rating: 5.0

It was not wrong to make the best of our time
Was it not a waste of time just passing time at home?
We walked to a place we met, not our home
Enough! We went out on the same route on time
Was it not a pre-destined route time?
Lovely pre-destination it is!

It was not wrong deserting our homes as not admirable
Was meeting in the streets not admirable?
We looked at each other in a way admirable

Enough! We went on to say the admirable
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Friday, December 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fate,future,love,premonition
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Faith Maina 06 January 2017

At times it is just good to go by the feelings that God put in your heat. God's plan is always good. Good poem.

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Rose Kanana 16 December 2016

I like the flow and choice of diction in this poem, it takes time to notice premonitions but when God is in control the rest is history. A 10 from me for this. Keep up gal.

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Juliki Katana 16 December 2016

I like this poem that invites lovers to just flow in God's good plans.

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